3 Things Anyone Can Do to Improve Their Writing

Posted by Sarah Mitchell on 10 May 2010 | 10 Comments

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I’ve had a busy week and I’m behind in almost everything. I only managed one blog post last week, I worked the weekend so my Friday deadlines didn’t slip into the next week, and my laptop has a couple dozen articles opened that I had intended to read, post and share. Ever had a week like that? Today I’m trying to get caught up. As I was trolling through the articles I had marked to read, I ran across a piece by Jason Fried in Inc. Magazine titled Why is Business Writing So Awful? You should read it.


I was surprised to discover in the author’s bio that Jason is a software guy. I assumed he was a copywriter because he succinctly details the problems with business writing. He has co-authored a book so maybe that’s how he became so informed about the problems with content. Nothing he mentions is difficult to figure out and he makes a great case for original content. It’s the most entertaining piece on writing I’ve seen in ages. I read the whole thing – word by word – right to the end of the page. In this day of skimming, writing something people actually read is a massive achievement.

Tools of the Trade

Jason endorses the use of professional writers if your company is lacking the appropriate talent. Obviously, I love his advice, but I’ve seen plenty of marketing material written by professionals that’s just as terrible as the DIY versions. It got me thinking about what businesses can do to help themselves. I employ three techniques for everything I write to improve the readability and usefulness of my copy. Here they are:

  • Use a spellchecker It’s an obvious bit of advice but I see an alarming number of spelling errors injected into everyday business communication. It’s terrible to read an email with spelling errors in it. When I see a website, brochure, press release or any other marketing document with a spelling error in it, I immediately assume the company is sloppy, lazy, unprofessional or a combination of the three.
  • Use the Gobbledygook Grader I’ve written about this before but it’s worth repeating. Hubspot provides a free online tool to detect any jargon, clichés, overused phrases or hyperbole. It takes seconds to get an analysis and improves your writing immeasurably. I still get caught using some form of gobbledygook in nearly every first draft I submit to it.
  • Read Aloud Do you remember when you first learned to read? Your teacher instructed you to read out loud so she could hear you and help you when you struggled. Reading your own writing aloud does the same thing. You ears will find mistakes your eyes miss. I read everything I write, in a normal speaking voice, before I submit it to a customer or post it on my blog.

What you say, and how you say it, reflects on you and your company. You don’t need to be a professional writer to improve the quality of your writing efforts. Take an extra couple minutes with all your business communication and I bet you will begin to see a difference.

Do you have any writing tips you want to share?

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  • Sheila!! Thank you so much for pointing out the error in my copy. It's now been corrected. :0)

    But, yes, it goes to show how easy it is to make mistakes. I bet I've been through that copy four or five times, at least.


    I think we can add another thing to the post: 4) Have a fresh set of eyes review your work before you publish it.

    Thanks for stopping by and tidying the place up!

    Posted by Sarah Mitchell, 10/06/2010 6:16pm (3 months ago)

  • Good suggestions. Have always done #1 and #3, and it is good to find out about the Gobbledygook Grader.

    But it looks like even that is not sufficient sometimes - have a look at your own sentence in the above posting - under TOOLS OF THE TRADE, the 4th sentence states " I employ three techniques for everything single thing I write to improve the readability and usefulness of my copy". Shouldn't that be " I employ three techniques for EVERY single thing I write to improve the readability and usefulness of my copy".

    Even experts like you can still make mistakes - which is a relief to mere mortals like myself :-).

    Having just discovered your blog, I must say I do like it a lot!
    Sheila

    Posted by Sheila Philip, 10/06/2010 6:01pm (3 months ago)

  • Thank you, John, for your kind words. You're the second person that has said they read their copy backwards.(The other comment was posted on the BizSugar site.) I'm going to try it, for sure.

    I'm glad you like the blog because your Content Marketing experiment is going to feature in my next post. I can't wait for it to get started.

    Posted by Sarah Mitchell, 13/05/2010 2:59am (4 months ago)

  • Hi Sarah

    My first time stopping by your blog, but I love the advice. Will check out Gobbledygook Grader - sounds great. The 'fresh eyes' approach is also good. I find it helps to do things slightly in advance, print it out and read it somewhere different. I normally spot different points that way. Another idea for really detailed proofing is to read backwards, word by word - that way your brain isn't fooled by the sense of the words.
    Great blog, thanks
    John

    Posted by John Bottom, 13/05/2010 1:56am (4 months ago)

  • Hi Mel,

    A fresh pair of eyes is a great suggestion. I rarely send something to a client before I've had a chance to reread it, first thing in the morning. I can usually find something to fix when my own eyes are fresh, too.

    Thanks for your comment.

    Posted by Sarah Mitchell, 11/05/2010 10:24pm (4 months ago)

  • My writing tips is that nothing beats a pair of "fresh eyes" reviewing your work before you finalise it. Ideally use someone with good grammar but anyone will do, just in case you've missed something obvious by being too close to it.

    PS How could I not know about the Gobblygook Grader, am loving the concept!

    Posted by Mel , 11/05/2010 10:14pm (4 months ago)

  • Hi Ryan,

    Thanks for the kind words. It's a big challenge to find a voice but so easy to lapse into the lingo of the industry. Even when I think I've nailed it, I can almost always find room for improvement. (Case in point, when I re-read this blog post after it was published I found a big error in it. Thankfully, digital publishing allows you to make corrections!)

    Posted by Sarah Mitchell, 11/05/2010 2:10am (4 months ago)

  • Hi Paul,

    I wasn't so generous last week, I can assure you. It's always a balancing act between staying informed, cranking out my own content and keeping my customers happy. Thanks for stopping by.

    Posted by Sarah Mitchell, 11/05/2010 2:06am (4 months ago)

  • Sound advice Sarah, no doubt. I especially like that your copy is always jargon free, succinct and has a distinct flow

    Posted by Ryan Briggs, 11/05/2010 1:11am (4 months ago)

  • Dear Sarah, if you weren't so generous reading and leaving fab comments on other people's blogs, you might have more time for yourself! Your loss is our gain. I do feel bad, but I just can't say stop! Best regards, P. :)

    Posted by Paul Hassing, 10/05/2010 11:55pm (4 months ago)

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